I need a book deal

[Black Jesus]

Originally Posted by Robdukes [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

This book would frustrate anyone trying to read it. People want to connect with the protagonist. Know how he or she feels. Not just read a story about what they did. Unless it's like a biography of a president and they're writing an essay. What you need is thoughts and feelings for the reader to make a connection with the character and not just actions.

I am a sociopath and have no emotion

[radditsu]

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[Pico]

would read