Writing a new song, work in progress

[Recycled Children]

I dig it. It's repetitive but not shabby. I don't really understand that long pause about half way through. If it's for effect it might just be too long.

[Diggles]

I'm having a tough time with the bridge from the main chorus to the finish too hence the blank nothing sound for 20 seconds hahahaha. But cheers man thanks!

[Recycled Children]

Need to stop reading the first sentence only.

[georgie]

i mean you can use that long pause to build the beat. i dont like how it goes from silent to sounding like you just forwarded into the middle of a song(if im explaining that right)

or like the song ended and you rewinded it 10 seconds back. i dont mean to flame on the song i dig it. i just could see this shit catch fires with a little fixes

you could probably fill in half of that long pause with a fade idk music terms but i mean fade as in when the song usually fades when it ends but in this case it goes from fade to back to original volume or w.e

[bled12345]

haha thanks man, i'll be sure to post the finished track when its done!

P.S. Xenogears = best game ever made

[bled12345]

but wait nm thats a FFT avatar isnt it? lol