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Planar Protector
Join Date: Jan 2023
Location: Felwithe
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checking the status of the new Claude model that released Sonnet 5, for creative writing.
prompt was to write as Hunter S Thompson at The Great American State Fair
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Fear and Loathing at the Reflecting Pool
We arrived at the Mall around noon, which in retrospect was the first mistake. Acid and direct sunlight do not mix well when you're standing next to a 2,000-foot-long puddle designed specifically to make the Washington Monument look twice as big as it already is. Some bastard architect built this thing as a mirror for the ego of the entire federal government, and I was the only person on the East Coast dumb enough to test what happens when you stare into it for four hours straight.
The photographer bailed early, muttering something about a Park Service golf cart that had "made eye contact with him first." Coward. I stayed. A school group from Ohio filed past in matching neon shirts, forty-some kids herded by a teacher who looked like she'd rather be anywhere — Baghdad, maybe, or federal prison — and I found myself explaining to a nine-year-old that the ducks in the pool were actually low-level congressional aides who'd been transformed as punishment for a bad amendment vote. He believed me completely. Smartest person I talked to all day.
By 3 PM the monument had started breathing. Not metaphorically — actually breathing, in and out, like it was as tired of standing there as everyone else. A Capitol Police officer wandered over, hand near his radio, and asked if I needed medical attention. I told him no, I was working, and gestured at the pool like that explained anything. He wrote something in a little notebook and walked off, which is more journalistic integrity than most of the White House press corps manages in a calendar year.
I never got the hearing story filed. Editor wasn't happy. But I stand by the piece I did file, three days late, about a man who watched Abraham Lincoln's reflection ripple apart every time a tour boat went by and decided that was the most honest thing Washington had shown him all week.
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We were somewhere around the funnel cake stand when the fairgrounds began to bulge.
I don't mean that figuratively. I mean the ground itself, three acres of trampled Kentucky bluegrass under a quarter-million patriotic feet, had started to swell and recede like something with lungs, and I remember thinking: this is either the drugs, or America's 250th birthday party has achieved sentience and it is pissed. Two hundred and fifty years of this. Two hundred and fifty years of building toward a Tuesday afternoon where a man in an eagle costume sells me a turkey leg the size of a toddler's arm, and I am supposed to write it up as human interest.
My editor wanted "color." My editor did not specify that the color would be a deep, pulsing magenta radiating off every funnel-cake booth on the midway, or that the Ferris wheel — sponsored, God help us, by a regional truck dealership — would begin rotating at a speed inconsistent with its visible mechanism, faster on the inside than the outside, a wheel eating itself in slow motion while six-year-olds screamed with what I can only assume was genuine joy and not, as I initially assumed, a shared vision of the abyss.
I had come to the fair with a plan. The plan was simple: eat something fried, watch a pig race, find the man responsible for greenlighting a "Founding Fathers Beard Growing Contest" and ask him, calmly, what in the hell he thought he was doing. The plan lasted eleven minutes. By minute twelve I was standing in front of a 4-H prize hog named Bicentennial Betsy, six hundred pounds of pink municipal pride, and she looked at me with an expression of such total, weary comprehension — she gets it, I thought, she's the only one here who gets it — that I had to sit down on a hay bale and reconsider my entire career.
Somewhere behind me, a cover band was murdering "Sweet Home Alabama" for the fourth time that afternoon, and a vendor was selling deep-fried Oreos next to a booth deep-frying butter next to a booth deep-frying, I swear on my mother's grave, a stick of deep-fried water — some kind of gelatin trick, though by then I no longer trusted my own optic nerve to file an accurate report. A woman in a stars-and-stripes tube top handed her infant a corn dog the size of the infant. The infant seemed pleased with this arrangement. Nobody else so much as blinked. This, I understood, was the actual America — not the fireworks, not the bunting, not the reenactors firing blanks at each other by the livestock pavilion, but this: total, cheerful, unblinking normalization of the grotesque, four hundred times a day, from birth.
I found a payphone — an honest-to-God payphone, preserved like a fossil near the funhouse — and called the desk collect.
"I need another day," I said.
"You need a doctor," said the editor.
He wasn't wrong, but he also wasn't paying for one, so I hung up and went to find the beer tent, which by that hour had transformed, in my professional opinion, into a kind of secular tabernacle — men in flag-print overalls raising sixteen-ounce cups of watery lager to the 250th anniversary of a country none of them could locate on a blank map, and loving it anyway, loving it harder for not being able to. That's the trick nobody tells you about patriotism. It doesn't require accuracy. It just requires volume.
By dusk the fireworks started, and here I will admit the acid did me a favor, because for about four minutes the sky over the midway looked exactly like what the whole grim, beautiful, overfed experiment was supposed to look like from the outside — chaotic, loud, wildly overproduced, and somehow still coming out gold. Bicentennial Betsy, from her pen, let out a long, satisfied grunt. I took it as a review.
I never got the beard contest interview. I never found the man responsible. But I got the fair, or it got me, and there's a piece filed either way — because at 250 years old, still frying its own water, still selling corn dogs the size of infants to actual infants, this country doesn't need a journalist telling it what it means.
It needs someone just sober enough to write it down before the wheel stops eating itself.
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