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Originally Posted by maskedmelon
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yeppers, think the pace and flow are just fine as is ^^ your style is rich, compact and fun. reminds me of david eddings or r.a. salvatore if you read any fantasy. I've not read much other fiction, so don't have anything else to equate it to. i liek it though ^^
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Aww. Yea I haven't read all of RA Salvatore's works but I found the Dark Elf Triology really inspiring. Really good author even if Drizzt is totally a Mary Sue. I try really hard to not make Nexii a Mary Sue. David Eddings I haven't read.
So this is a bit nerdy and directed to all. What is your Save vs Torture (0-255)? It can be in a BDSM sexual context or just how much you think you could resist torture if say captured/abducted. I'd put myself at about a 140. Nothing spectacular, mild to moderate pain is fun but I'm no junky for it. Anything harder or extreme I go into shock pretty easily.