The Lost Adventures, Part 1

[lineeyed]

Originally Posted by Pokesan [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

https://www.reddit.com/r/p99roleplay/

do it OP

Not really roleplaying if it actually happened.

[pyroglyphix]

Originally Posted by B4EQWASCOOL [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Overestimated is one word. When you sharp shoot someone, check your 6.

Sharpshoot is one word.

Also, "6" should be written as "six".

[maerilith]

Some paragraphs and better sentence structure and I would actually attempt to read. But not in current form,

[Spyder73]

Was written on iPad, sucks to write on. Will update/edit when I write part 2....maybe this afternoon