Storytime with Strifer: TMO kills Trakanon!

[Yapas]

Funny story [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

[katrik]

Originally Posted by Era'viss [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

...with dragons.

*instantly pictures Daenarys (sp) riding a dragon with her big dong hanging out*

[Strifer]

While I appreciate the suggestions, I don't know how long it'd be before that thread got banned/deleted. Maybe I'll have to start a blog =P

I do like the idea of Hasbinbad and Harrison camping that has potential for something more comedic hmmm..

[Era'viss]

I'd really like to the epic tragedy of Nizzar from Nihilum.

I have seen the gifs. I would like to know more.

[Samoht]

Originally Posted by Peatree [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Harrison and Hasbinbad go camping together?

Originally Posted by katrik [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

A hot, super gay, tranny love story.

what's the diff?

[katrik]

Originally Posted by Samoht [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

what's the diff?

lol

[Strifer]

Originally Posted by Samoht [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

what's the diff?

There's a difference between a "Weekend at Bernie's" parody and writing Brokeback LAN Party.

[susvain0362]

Originally Posted by katrik [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

A hot, super gay, tranny love story.

Fahndango and Emmie meet (love at first sight) in a CoM moat group.

Emmie comes on TS and sounds hot.

Fahndango forum crushes on Katrik for months.

Katrik turns out to be super pretty.

Fahndango and Katrik go on a date ---> get married and live whereved the gal wants.

it's a love story baby just sayyyyyyyyyyyy yesssssssssssssssssssssssssss.

[gotrocks]

^^ [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] thats so cute.

[susvain0362]

but lets all be real here. these type of threads are awesome. Stinkum KILLS IT with his Cros Treewind and Defense of the Paladin stories. Those are legitimately awesome. This story is just too bland and nothing unique happens at all. No in-game SS...its just meh.


TMO beats IB/FE to Trackanon. Whens the last time this DID'NT happen? If you are gonna use this concept to make a compelling story/thread you gotta throw in some unique details and circumstances. You literally only said that TMO mobilizies and gets the Trackanon kill over IB/FE. My advice would be to throw in some names/details in the story that make the scenario unique than an average TMO beats FE thread.

For example....a SS of tasslehoff or a FE member dieing on the clear to Track. Or someone from IB lost in emerald jungle or tracks teeth. Any pictures like that. Something. I really do not like to criticize your thread because i appreciate the effort and i want to see more in the future and you definately have fantastic potential. If Stinkum is Tom Brady you are a Tim Tebow maybe. feel me?