Writing a new song, work in progress

bled12345 · #1 11-16-2011, 03:13 AM

so awhile ago I posted some shit I was making, i'm still working on producing electronica haha and its slowly starting to get better sounding!!

I'm working on this song right now, prolly like 10 hours deep cause I'm still learning ableton live 8 finally but I think its starting to come together! Any suggestions? It's only like 1/3rd of the way done but I think the whole song structure is starting to be pretty sound.

anyways cheers and enjoy!

http://soundcloud.com/jtungsten/first-song-in-awhile

Diggles · #2 11-16-2011, 03:18 AM

I think the bass needs a little more oomph, but other than that, I like.

Diggles · #3 11-16-2011, 03:19 AM

Props, I could never make electronic music. I have a hard enough time recording actual instruments!

bled12345 · #4 11-16-2011, 03:23 AM

haha thanks man, I couldn't agree more with the bass lol its just kind of a filler bass line until I finish more of the song and can put something more epic in there without stepping over everything else.

I'm having a tough time with the bridge from the main chorus to the finish too hence the blank nothing sound for 20 seconds hahahaha. But cheers man thanks!

What do you play? Music is awesome, my grandma forced me into piano at an early age lol.

Diggles · #5 11-16-2011, 03:31 AM

I play bass for a jazz band and guitar for a little metal jam group I play with, also a drummer.

purest · #6 11-16-2011, 03:34 AM

sounds dildos

bled12345 · #7 11-16-2011, 03:55 AM

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sounds dildos

lolz

loopholbrook · #8 11-16-2011, 04:48 AM

Fuck this, my blues song is better than this. http://soundcloud.com/loopholbrook/the-black-wiis

bled12345 · #9 11-16-2011, 11:36 AM

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Fuck this, my blues song is better than this. http://soundcloud.com/loopholbrook/the-black-wiis

Lol wow. I love the blues... And this fucking blows. Its you just playing some very noob blues acales and a couple chords. Im all for supporting ppl with their music but you shit on mine and then post this garbage? Wow lol

Diggles · #10 11-16-2011, 11:37 AM

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Fuck this, my blues song is better than this. http://soundcloud.com/loopholbrook/the-black-wiis

I could shit out better music than this and it wouldn't be as dissonant.