Starting an Iksar SK, 13kish budget

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I've already got a CoS for him, black sapphire earring, and a smoldering brand for 1hb. I've priced the following out to around 12k, but have around 1k extra to toss in if needed. I'm mainly looking for some help with oversights, as I'm not nearly as familiar with melee gear as I am with caster. I focused mostly on +hp gear, but if there's better price to performance elsewhere in some of my pieces, I'm all ears.

arms - dark scale sleeves
back - Cloak of the Maelstrom
chest - Phase Spider Carapace
ear 1 - Orc Fang Earring
face - Crystal Spider Eyes
feet - Lodizal Shell Boots
finger 1 - Platinum Fire Wedding Ring
finger 2 - Platinum Fire Wedding Ring
hands - Silver Chitin Hand Wraps
head - Crown of the Forlorn
legs - Giant Scalemail Leggings
neck - Black Sapphire Platinum Necklace
shoulders - Giant Scalemail Mantle
waist - Sebilite Scale Belt
wrist 1 - Tar goo strands
wrist 2 - Tar goo strands
1hs - Large Dragonbone Shard
2hb - Deathbringer's Rod
2hs - Vindication
piercing - Sarnak Backstabber
shield - Clay Guardian Shield
ranged - Runed Bone Fork

Any and all input is appreciated. Thank you.

Edit: This is for Green.