As an adventuring journal, I tip my hat to you for doing something that takes some work to do.
I hope you'll take this next part as a bit of constructive criticism. When writing a story, especially fan-fiction, you need to be intensely aware of the setting and people involved. Writing prose from the PoV of an ogre, in first person, is hard to really immerse one's self in when he's using language that not even high school students can handle without stealing off wikipedia.
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But something tells me you didn't do this for the story aspect, but I could be wrong. /shrug