Lack of variety of shots, way too much just from the front same perspective.
Not bad at all for a first video, good choice going with a Canon but you need to provide more variety of angles/perspectives/distance from subject to lens (basic filmography).
You had a variety of scenes but they got stale from the same perspective, just my 2 cents and good luck in the future
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