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Originally Posted by Cecily
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I guess my complaint is "lurching and weird" is not an enjoyable process for the reader, which, if we're bothering to share thoughts at all, one should consider accessibility for the audience's sake. This almost entirely comes down to flow, one idea connecting to the next, and word choice to a lesser extent.
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Well, perhaps you'd get to read my love letters if you were more lovely. Instead, it stays in this nuthouse.