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Originally Posted by imperiouskitten
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the way I write here is to re-edit my post in a dialectic sort of process where i cover all the bases as they appear and develop my ideas after publishing. i enjoy the process that way but the result is often lurching and weird. it's not generally meant to be high prose, more an anxious self-flagellation [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] |
I guess my complaint is "lurching and weird" is not an enjoyable process for the reader, which, if we're bothering to share thoughts at all, one should consider accessibility for the audience's sake. This almost entirely comes down to flow, one idea connecting to the next, and word choice to a lesser extent.