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Originally Posted by Cecily
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I'm trying to figure out what it is about your writing I can't tolerate. Bad writing is like pornography, you know it when you see it, but damned if I can isolate any problems to give you pointers on how to pretend to communicate like a normal human being. I'm gonna just say convoluted, pretentious drivel that needs some editing to be readable, which is a shame because it's an interesting post.
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it is your animus which animates you, baby. it's not pretension if it's how i talk. i would thank you kindly if you didn't interact with me this way anymore.