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Originally Posted by maskedmelon
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i think your writing style is compact enough that you could easily parse this last post into liek 3 or 4 smaller bites. retain all the good stuff, but adopt a less daunting presentation ^^
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Gotcha. So same pace just shorter segments? I can probably do this though each will probably end up just being one scene then rather than a few places/times. I keep meaning to just do one all out erotica but there's always new server drama to write about