Thread: Was a good run
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Old 11-10-2016, 07:44 PM
Korrupt Korrupt is offline
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Originally Posted by AzzarTheGod [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]
few things I picked up on here

1) terrible grammar. if he cant type proper sentences and complete thoughts, what makes you think he has a brain that is capable of anything?

2) biased narrative style story-telling, narrator is trying to sound cool and leet. I think that try-hard Darworth wrote that? maybe some Flowers of Happiness jerkoff, or one of those wannabe random pks from <Deadly Retribution> darwoth's shitty guild.

3) makes no sense. conclusion makes no sense because the event he is describing doesn't even make sense
Rustled

Got it.