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Old 03-05-2011, 05:03 AM
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I like the lead.
I like how not every single 2 and 4 has a clap; more variation like that, while keeping the "ghost feel" of the 2 and 4 is awesome imho..
I like the high hat drag.

Unsolicited advice - take it or leave it:
Add an extra bass sound for most of the 1s and 3s, something deeper and more evil? Try and blend the bass sounds where they overlap via mixing the gain down on the current bass sound.
Up the tempo; i like that you are going for the slower downtempo vibe, but it drags a bit.
Add moar soundz!! Some ambient twinkles, some extra percussion, maybe some other stabs? I like the simplicity, but your soundscape is kind of barren.

Lots of progress altogether tho, sounds cool as fuck!
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