Dude you need to shape your sounds, use filters and eq on them (seperately) - stay away from cheeseball effects unless you make a really dry mix, but it honestly sounds like you just took a bunch of stock sounds and put them together, which is COOL but not great..
better video with beardyman doing what he really does best, also some fluteboxing
[You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] (shit gets gangster at 12:45 lulz)