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Originally Posted by Ronas
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Trans is happily playing in the sand pit and DA come along and play with
DA says: Oh i think i left my truck somewhere out here, i think it was around here i buried it and will need to dig it up
Trans: Oh i want to play with it too, i help dig it up with.
DA: hey here it is found it
Trans: Gimme!
DA: Wtf, i found it first
Trans: (cry) Mommy
Rogean: Hey kids, whats wrong?
Trans: I was playing in the pit and DA came and took my truck.
DA: ....
Rogean: Look here DA, dont go taking his truck, i saw him in the pit a while now, hand it over.
DA: But i buried it last week and dug it up, its mine.
Rogean: Look i dont care i saw him in the pit playing, give it to him.
DA: ...., fine here. what a cry baby.
Trans: (Smile) hahah take that.
DA: What?
Trans: Nothing.
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Umm...since when did Innoruuk belong to DA?
Your script would be better written to say....
Trans is happily playing in the sand pit and DA come along and play with
DA says: Oh looks like Trans is looking for that lost truck that disappeared last week.
Trans: Oh we are already here looking for it, perhaps you could wait till we have finished then you can look for yourself.
DA: hey here it is found it!
Trans: wtf, did you not understand we were already here?
DA: Wtf, i found it first
Trans: Punkasses, lets talk to an adult and see what he says!
Rogean: Hey kids, whats wrong?
Trans: I was playing in the pit looking for that lost truck and DA came and took the truck we was looking for.
DA: ....but we found the truck!
Rogean: Look here DA, they were here first looking for the truck, i saw him in the pit a while now, hand it over.
DA: But i shouldn't have to wait for them to find it why does the rules apply to me!
Rogean: Look i dont care i saw him in the pit looking for the truck, give it to him.
DA: ...., fine here. what a cry baby.
Trans: Punkasses learn to play by the rules.
DA: What? Rules?
Trans: Nothing.