but lets all be real here. these type of threads are awesome. Stinkum KILLS IT with his Cros Treewind and Defense of the Paladin stories. Those are legitimately awesome. This story is just too bland and nothing unique happens at all. No in-game SS...its just meh.
TMO beats IB/FE to Trackanon. Whens the last time this DID'NT happen? If you are gonna use this concept to make a compelling story/thread you gotta throw in some unique details and circumstances. You literally only said that TMO mobilizies and gets the Trackanon kill over IB/FE. My advice would be to throw in some names/details in the story that make the scenario unique than an average TMO beats FE thread.
For example....a SS of tasslehoff or a FE member dieing on the clear to Track. Or someone from IB lost in emerald jungle or tracks teeth. Any pictures like that. Something. I really do not like to criticize your thread because i appreciate the effort and i want to see more in the future and you definately have fantastic potential. If Stinkum is Tom Brady you are a Tim Tebow maybe. feel me?
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