Composing my own epic

[Jaqala]

As a role playing bard it just seemed natural to start composing my adventures!

There was an Emperor none to bold
Listen to my story and be fortold
Weary wayward wandering traveler
Come to Faydwer become unraveler
For over yonder orc hill
Lies the Emperor still
In his castle high
He sieges Faydark nigh
Be there Ambassadar to save this land
No he come holding dirk in hand
Weary heroes take warning
There is an orc storm comming

-Ponnce

[Wonkie]

there was a hobbit from thicket
in thai girls he like-d to stick it
little he knew
after many he do'ed
they mostly was boys who became women

[skarlorn]

Is that an original Ponnce

[fadetree]

Wonkie...too many syllables in last line line, dude. Cmon. Try -
they mostly was boys become women

There, now its deathless literature. You are welcome.

[Rygar]

Singing about leveling in...Crushbone? Oh man... let me guess, next up: Oasis, HHK, Mistmoore, City of Mist, Karnor's castle sonnets?

Be bold, write me a tale of song that boasts of near misses in Najena, coerced dwarves in Dalnir, ghostly terrors of Kaesora, and the hiss of goblins from the depths of Droga.

[d3r14k]

There once was an elf-pal named Jaqala,
Who frolicked in the flora and fauna,
He wandered from home, all the way to the zone,
But was trained and it ended his nirvana

[fadetree]

Too many syllables again in last line.
"But was trained and it ended nirvana"
or
"But was trained and got sent to nirvana"
otherwise A+

[jackd104]

Nice job. I enjoyed your song.

[skarlorn]

i have actually composed eq epics

it's probably not worth the time

[d3r14k]

Spyder be playin with fire today

[Jaqala]

Heh, Yeah it is an original =)

[Jaqala]

Singing about leveling in...Crushbone? Oh man... let me guess, next up: Oasis, HHK, Mistmoore, City of Mist, Karnor's castle sonnets?

Be bold, write me a tale of song that boasts of near misses in Najena, coerced dwarves in Dalnir, ghostly terrors of Kaesora, and the hiss of goblins from the depths of Droga.

Challenge Accepted ;)